she was standing in the middle of the hallway, casting her problem at people in hopes that someone will get hooked.
her line is baited with tears and the worst moments of her life.
it draws people in.
she tightens her grasp and pulls them close.
with fake tears in her eyes, she asks for compliments.
as soon as she gets what she wanted, she throws them back out into the sea of people.
she re-bates her line, and casts it out again.
i walked past and narrowly avoided the three prong hook
and cried in pity that a girl as beautiful, smart, bubbly, and popular as her could need so much validation.
whoa, okay.
ReplyDeletethis was scathing and real.
i don't know if i've ever used the word scathing to describe a blog post.
you have, actually :P
Deleteon another note-
woah. woah.
this post. woah.
I'm so glad I'm not actually a girl so I know this isn't about me cause whoa. (and I mean that in the best way, cause this is great)
ReplyDeletewoh. woh. woah? Yep. that's how you spell it. woah.
ReplyDeletecould need so much validation."""""""
ReplyDeleteUhhhhhh YESSSS
Seriously good writing right here
ReplyDeleteWell dang this was flipping awesome. Especially and cried in pity that a girl as beautiful, smart, bubbly, and popular as her could need so much validation.
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